If that installation is twin & earth, or even includes three core & earth, using a separate "box" in the ceiling void for the neutrals & earths not sure that would really be kosher...? How would you get the live(s) from the twin or three core & earth to the switches/dimmers. Not a problem if using single cores but for sheathed conductors? Single cores would "usually" be in conduit, or on occasion even trunking, and allow all manner of installation options.
And the box as shown I doubt there's enough space for Wago or similar connectors; so agree that a deeper box is really required (t)here...
Also is the current wiring (the actual conductors) single core or from twin/triple core + earth. Whichever There seems to be some odd colour coding going on as to what/which conductor is doing?
The installation as is does look a bit (perhaps a lot) like a botched job; be it DIY (and not all DIY do botched installations) or otherwise...