Chris I really liked the first one although I didn't comment at the time. In my humble it has a real contrast which makes it work (at least for me). You have the contrast of shape and angle, round against square (OK: squareish
) You have the form of it, the fact it's not a 2D design, shadow etc, but the thing that makes the first one for me as a design (again, just my humble) is that tiny bit where the circle
just overhangs the rectangles. That for me is the bit that makes the first one. It's that little detail that catches the eye.
This is your difficult second album.
Apologies, but for me it doesn't work half so well but I really appreciate you posting your ongoing efforts It's interesting!
Maybe it's the grain but i think maybe its just a bit dissonant. It doesn't connect. I think generally our minds like to connect the dots and tbh I find it hard to connect the dots on this one. No criticism!
A weird wander down the path of design and art and all that that I wouldn't normally get to think about. I had a great art teacher at school who told me all this stuff about the golden ratio, the rule of thirds and all that. At the time it was an eye opener, he was one of those teachers.
I am in no position 25 years later to quantify it but I do know I used to lay a LOT of driveways as a hard landscaper. My curves always got the thumbs up . Read that how you will lol meanwhile I need to get back to tiling the F*ng bathroom which is all about straight lines. Aiiii.